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Max and the Magic Lens Ch.15CHAPTER 15: Sweet Revenge

The next day seemed more promising. Max, having neglected his routine of sleeping an extra hour, decided to actually wake up on time and felt all the more revived for it. He first stretched and yawned with the sophistication of a gorilla and within a couple of short increments he was rummaging through his drawers.
Layers of undershirts and boxers were peeled aside, revealing his newer, more delicate undergarments. Even though Max had been dealing with such an extraordinary plight for the past few months now, he still hadn’t made a place for his female clothing. Sure he kept a system going, but he really did

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Ch.7 pg.132by ~Hipper-Reed

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Okay, first page of the next chapter (Which will be titled "A Girl Called Roxanne"), but I still need to make a title page (which WILL be in color) so that's why it hasn't been posted on the main comic site.

Anyway, I decided to jump right in on this chapter, with the reprise to THIS musical number: [link]

Obviously the art is much different than it used to be, so forgive me if the original version of Roxanne looks . . . under-developed.

Anyway, this reprise is gonna span another five pages or so, but I think it neatly jump starts us into Roxanne's mindset and gives a good idea about how she feels about things before an actual plot begins (there is a plot for this chapter beyond singing, honest).

Now, about lack of color. I really want this to look like a manga and when I get used to various patterns and tectures, I'm pretty sure things will take less time than they normally would. I plan on keeping the title pages and special pages in color however, but this is supposed to mainly free up some time and since most of my viewership comes from other art pieces, the impetus to keep every page in color isn't really necessary, unlike the more fetishy shorty comics (i.e. Wedding Bliss).

Anyway, hope you enjoy

!bobbydude May 15, 2011

And someone made a comparison of this to the Wotch, I can see it somewhat.

But your art has really advanced since you started out, and the Wotch's kinda... eh.

I notice the resemblance in the updating patterns, unfortunately. (long hiatuses) But you've been doing somewhat better as of late.

~Hipper-Reed May 16, 2011

Haven't had much choice as of late. Been forced to move three times already and now I'm nearly homeless. And jobless (not for lack of trying for the past month and a half). I'm poor and I don't get enough commissions. I'm doing my best though, honest. But right now I don't even have the ability to use my own computer.

!bobbydude May 15, 2011

Woah! I love the new style, I feel it really suits your art more than the deplorable color fills and gradients you used. Keep this style up!

And I look forward to where this goes. Although it didn't really seem like the last arc went anywhere.. you always seem to get around to the transformation aspect and then sort of.. slow down and hover around that.

Hopefully this one's plot will be more intricate ;D.

~Hipper-Reed May 16, 2011

Noted.

I hope it is.

~larqven May 12, 2011

Glad to see Roxanne get her piece! Do we really know her story! Was she a jock that made Angel's/Andrew's life miserable--or was she just a random passerby that was punished for obviously being a jock?

Roxanne either learned style quickly, or yeah, I suspect that she just wasn't turned into a girl--but into a "cheerleader", with all the sense of girlish style necessary to be a popular girl getting slammed into her mind!

A read a TG story years ago like that. The implanted information and behaviors are rather nice, and help immeasurably with the adjustment process--but can be very, very disconcerting! Indeed, might be considered a subtle form of mind control programmed into the new girl. Behaving like a perfect girlie girl when there is little desire to do so.

We know that Roxanne sure didn't like her mom's choice of clothing for her! 'Course, that could just be intergenerational. For that matter, Roxanne's parents seem to know that she was a boy once; yet seem to treat the magical tg in stride, as if their son just decided to be revealed as a trans-sexual and live as a girl? (and taking THAT rather well too, for that matter?!) Not exactly a seamless distortion of reality, as a wide ranging manipulation of minds and events to plop a former jock into the life of a girl?

Yeah, it beats being turned into a frog! Or clothes! Angel's turning even innocent women into clothes now! XO

~jordanhitman May 11, 2011

i see the catchy song has finally "caught" Roxanne, So to say.

~Hipper-Reed May 12, 2011

Indeed

~anivert May 10, 2011

i prefer the other style u us

~Hipper-Reed May 10, 2011

It's the same style as before, just with less color.

~ShaD-23 May 10, 2011

Well, I DO like manga, and this IS an interesting switch. I'd like to see how things play out from here.

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