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Wedding Bliss DX pg.4

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Here's the next page. It took me longer than expected (Thank you ever so much, GIMP, for randomly deciding to crash no less than six times and wasting about a cumulative hour of my time) but I'm happy with the result. Was thinking about making the text semi-transparent like I did in the original, but decided that was stupid since there are a gajillion other ways of visually showing what Elliot/Eliza is thinking.

Also, unlike the original version of this, I didn't rip old photos from the net. Yay, originality :thumbsup:

Hope you enjoy :)

NOTE So many have stated that they preferred the "You" in the hypnosis statements from the original, instead of the "I". But I did this for a reason. I wanted it to be more insidious. It's one thing to have a mustachioed man wave a pocket watch and say, "You are getting sleepy," and quite another to make the victim convince themselves they've just taken three helpings of nyquil and that listening to what they're told is probably the single, most amazing thing they could do.

In other words, by having her/him say "I" instead of Gonad saying "You" it makes the action less passive, more inclusive, and shows that Elliot (at least a part of him) is convincing HIMSELF, through Gonad, those things he/she mentions.

I don't know. It just seemed more interactive that way.





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I just love how frolic is a sound effect, hehe.