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Wedding Bliss DX pg.5 by Hipper-Reed Wedding Bliss DX pg.5 by Hipper-Reed
Well here's the next page. As you can see, I switched the perspective on the third panel from that of the original. Felt it's more dynamic this way. Yeah, that's what I'm claiming. Dynamics. Definitely not because it's more pervy this way . . . . .

Anyway, I added some "mist" to give it a sort of seance. Of what I don't know, maybe it's a kind of fragrance that's being burned? Eh.

The "black dude" from the original still has no head. I'm just lazy like that. It's not like he's that important. He only lasts one panel. Then the aliens come and eat his brains for the first course as is the custom for most horror films.

How many "first dead" black people have been sacrificed to saciate the hunger of these bloodthirsty villains? Are they just attracted to more mellinen? Alas, poor souls, we hardly knew ye.

I think I might have a strayed a bit . . . .

So yeah. Um.
The sparkly bits on Eliza's see-through shirt was a last-minute inspiration thing. I had planned for it to be transparent but for the longest time I kept thinking, "Something's missing . . . . hmmm." Then it hit me, "Not sparkly enough." So I made it sparkly enough.

Hope you guys enjoy it :)

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:iconthe-sand-prince:
the-sand-prince Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
still wierd
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:iconpascalofpiers:
PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
XD...The thign about mind control...you CAN'T be controlled to do a thing you are morally agains tdoing. So he is totally okay with erasing his past and being a girl, being a girl...but what breaks him out is the whole 'not do men' thing XD.
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HungryPaperweight Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010
Nope. Still not sparkly enough.

:iconsparklesplz: :iconsparklesplz: :iconsparklesplz:

There we go! ...Aargh!!! I'm blind!

Anyways, I like how, in the first panel, you have Eliza repeat what Gonad tells her. Definitely adds to the creepiness factor, but in a good way. ;)
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fakenameyfakenamey Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
"Only you can prevent magical transgender brainwashing" - Smoky the Bear

This comic is great, I can't wait for the next installment!
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:iconnekollx:
NekoLLX Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student Filmographer
So she skinned a vampire for the sparkles?
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:iconangela999:
Angela999 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Every time a vampire sparkles a kitten dies. ;P
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:iconnekollx:
NekoLLX Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Student Filmographer
to much possy in the world anyway
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:iconhipper-reed:
Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
It's entirely plausible :giggle:
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sandwitch0125 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Nice. Although the hand in the central panel of the male seems a bit off.
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:iconhipper-reed:
Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Yeah, it does, doesn't it. Oh well, still not perfect when it comes to perspective, am I? ^^;
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SKJAM Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
I am amused that the other participant in the pillow fight looks more like a female version of the transformee than she does herself.

And of course the sudden sobering up when she suddenly learns she's not supposed to be a lesbian in this timeline.
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:iconhipper-reed:
Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Eh, we'll see :XD:
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:iconmidnight-tea:
Midnight-Tea Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
"I am amused that the other participant in the pillow fight looks more like a female version of the transformee than she does herself."

Like a victim of the spring of drowned girl having a pillow fight with an alternate version of herself whom is a victim of the spring of drowned bishoujo bride? :D
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:iconskjam:
SKJAM Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Indeedy!

Shameless plug--have you read "The Journal of Sanjuro Tanaka"?
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:iconmidnight-tea:
Midnight-Tea Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, it's why I said it. Recognized your name.
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MWkillkenny84 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Use the Force Xellos-like dude, use the Force!
The victim can not escape the brainwashing!
Vote: 10
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:iconhipper-reed:
Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Yay! :clap:
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dukeskunk Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
I love this story, her look in panel 3 reminds me of Lum from "Those Obnoxious Aliens".

Also I love him questioning the liking boys part, I guess you can't make a person believe something contrary to their true nature. Wear a dress, sure, become a girl, okay, like guys, hang on a second. . . girl after my own heart.
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Sure. :nod:
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Where to begin?

The first panel is a brilliant saving throw on your, doing a vailant attempt at restablishing the feel the original comic had regarding the brainwashing narrative.

Sadly, I have to say that the image of her wildly dominating the pillow fight was actually a lot more funny.

And the panel of her 'wanting men with blue hair and having a lot of lust to sat' is A LOT MORE CREEPY in the new version, showing how depraved this guy REALLY is! Seriously, just twisted.

I REALLY REALLY HOPE you keep the gradiant eyes for when he's brain zapped, it just REALLY gives the feeling of it all PERFECTLY!

What no 'Yesss' from the brainwasher?

I do like the 'wait,WHAT?' look on the bride's face.

And his real self in his mind going 'Now wait just a minute here!!'


Also, him questioning that last bit made sense, the rest he'd have logically had information on his life to draw from, he's never been attracted to guys before so his brain can't create something logical for it.
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Uncle-Ben Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Where's the black dude? The sparkly part is great. All sorts of good stuff here. Good job.
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Thanks :thumbsup:
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Angela999 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Very nice. I love your new style. :aww:
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Thanks :XD: New style?
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Angela999 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Yeah, compared to Wedding Bliss 1.0 ;)
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Ah. Yeah, definitely :XD:
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Animefan-279 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
A fluke?
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
???
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Animefan-279 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
He started questioning the liking boys part.
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Oh. I'd say more like a sudden epiphany during the brainwashing.
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Animefan-279 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:sing:There's a hole in the world like a great black pit:sing:And it's filled with people who are full of shit:sing:And the vermin of the world inhabit it:sing:But not for long:sing::iconevilsmileplz:
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ShaD-23 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
At long last, an update. He/she looks so cute embroiled in a pillow fight. BTW, is she coming onto Smokey the Bear in the center panel?
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:iconhipper-reed:
Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Wow, now you mention it, holly crap it IS smoky. 0.o
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ShaD-23 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD: I thought the exact same thing in the first cut.lol
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Midnight-Tea Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Blue hair is awesome! But better on girls~

We need to fix this guy.
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
What do you mean?
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:iconmidnight-tea:
Midnight-Tea Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
So he's a bluehaired girl! *sagenod*
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
:confused:
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:iconmidnight-tea:
Midnight-Tea Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I come from Kerina's school of thought that a TG story which ends with any males left standing is unfinished.

Don't mind me! XD
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Princess-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Brilliant as always, Hipper. :)
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Hipper-Reed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
Thankyou :)
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:iconprincess-kay:
Princess-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
:)
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